Reading Notes Ramayanna Parts C and D

Sugriva with orders to guard the mouth till his return ( of the hole )
Rama kills Vali in such an apparently dishonorable way…. He is the one that is hard headed enough not to believe his own brother. The Ambush
Sugriva is so virtuous that he weeps for his dead brother and so do the mahamatras
Rama is so virtuous that though it is not his nature to wait when danger is potentially going to happen. Even as the rain comes in … he honors his father’s vows.
Rama is perplexed by Sugriva not yet doing as he said that he would.



CC BY-SA 3.0, Rama kills Vali
Picture taken in Cambodia
Author : DoktorMax
What if Sirgiva actually worked for Ravanna? When Rama become, impatient and sends Lakshmana, he could kidnap him allowing me to write an escape or perhaps a rescue from Rama.
Perhaps monkeys don’t keep their word? Can you trust a monkey, they always seem to be playing around?
We could discuss how Sampati misses his brother Jatayu maybe Sampati wants to get in the fight but lacks the courage of his older brother Jatayu. That could be a great plat twist latter the redemption of Sampati’s honor that he swore to act on his brother’s behalf. Wouldn’t his brother be proud of him?
Can you believe it? The writer stole my idea all those years ago? Maybe it was Jatayu who burnt his wings yet overcame the disability, why doesn’t Sampati fight? But Sampati told him not to fly so high all those years ago, and he told him not to get involved in Rama’s battles, see what happened, now Jatayu is dead! Why didn’t his beloved brother listen to him? Sampati is alive, or is he?
So they raped the city? But gently?
The she demons are a dreadful site
Sita prays to fire, what if it answers like the alchemist?
I could use the fact that Rama feared the magic of the rakshasas
Himalaya is someone who can be consulted. What else could we call on to counter the fire-god’s brahma weapons. Perhaps water will give a weapon to counteract the fire gods weapon.
Wow, Rama is afraid she has been soiled by the Ravanna, how virtuous.
The gods show up in their shining cars? This could be interesting in a story twist.
The God remembers he is the head of the gods. Begins to pass out gifts of time to faithful followers. Perhaps he could pass out other brahma weapons. Creating quests for worthy humans to accomplish.
Perhaps a better description of what Vishnu looks like as he re-enters heaven.

Bibliography: Public Domain story of  Ramayana




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